Posted by admin | Posted in Build a Shed | Posted on 10-09-2010
Tags: tears shed freestyle
How does my poem sound?
Is it good or not? I need opinions. It's just a random poem I wrote. 
I hope you understand the meaning and what it is. It is an original poem … I wrote it in 10 minutes. I have written about 30 poems, but this is one of my favorites. It is a freestyle poem thus there is no rhyme scheme. Innocence lost: Tears shed, dreams taken, stolen innocence. An endless black hole of sadness. downward spiral is your life. deep depression that has sunk into. The pain and hatred has taken its toll. Some terrible person, taking her innocence without their consent. Blamed. She knows how to say. Live his life and moving on is a constant struggle. What was the laughter has turned into tears. What was the happiness has become depressed and scared. Innocence stolen.
I really like him. I can almost completely relate to it. <3
MKG – Tear Shed : Finale Mix + Tear A Pella + Emu Mix