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what is wrong with this poem?

crying in the rain outside the veiled women in black umbrella tip to one side Like the undertaker heart attack becomes a cold shoulder out of bed today is another day to die, say the blade of his shed another whose luck ran out just a commodity to bury another loss path of blind children is child care that is young enough to die in the world you no sympathy for this poor boy clean tear from his eye to his grave is ready for this house will last until the end of the world, says in his smokepipe morning in view of their day to live in this house that I made for you

Good words. Needs polishing. The third stanza, last line does not fit the flow, the needs of another word to make it work. For example: "A blind child should be careful" or "blind children should" Be careful, if you can see what I mean, just to set the flow when say it aloud. There are other areas that need adjustment it is likely that they can see now. Seems to have had the idea and simply wrote, unedited. I do so do not lose the thought. It's good what you've written and if you go back a couple of times to fix the text to be even better. You should consider a musical score behind it and turn it into a song, poetry that it really is as far as I'm concerned, the song without the music still. Groovy stay

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